First of all, the render looks good. I think enough people would be satisfied with this result, but there's also room for improvement. I think the general thing that needs to be
improved are the materials. They need to be more realistic. The wood looks good, I would that alone for now.
The metals, like the ceiling and the weights (for lifting) look like they could be made of plastic OR from metal, it's something inbetween. Try to change the roughness and/or add a tiny tiled
bump map, also you could add multiple BSDF layers to increase realism. The white metal on the training devices is too white, it get's blown out in the render, lower the white color to a more subtle white
(around 230, in the RGB settings). The carpet looks good, realistic on close-up, but it tiles too much. In most cases you can only get away with this much tiling if the patern has squares in it, but
again it looks realistic so the settings of the material I wouldn't change.
The last thing you could do is light the place only with the lamps that are on the ceiling and change the color to the according tint of TL lamps, they look a bit too white now. It will give you a bit
more shadow and more depth.
For your first interiour render this looks great, don't forget that and the fact that you still want to improve is a really good property!
Hopefully you can do something with all of these critics
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), but I have kind of hit a wall on HOW to improve them.
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